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PostSubject: Sarah Kaedwin   Sarah Kaedwin EmptyThu Apr 17, 2014 4:28 pm

Full Name: Ieteiline Deawodaen
Nickname: Sarah Kaedwin
Gender: Female
Age: 36
Race: Elf
Languages: Common (So far)
Birthplace: Eurisko forests
Occupation: None
Main Interest: Philosophy, Natural sciences, Knowledge.

Brief Backstory: Ieteiline Deawodaen was born off the coast of Eurisko in a small colony of 10 elves. Her mother was Menrahdre Womoaen, and her father was Klyselvoore Womoaen. She enjoyed playing with other kid in the colonly, Grahvien Hoerdeen, who was born under different parents. 

       She lived an easy life up until 5, the colony lived off of the resources found in the forest and she was alwyas finding something to wander off and do. when she was eventually thrown out at age 5 for the murder of her mother, she wandered hopelessly around the coast for a few days. She was eventually kidnapped by a band of dwarven slave traders. There she was fed and lived in a small room on a ship until age 18, The whole time she was not sold, for reasons she does not know.

       At her age of 18 the ship was boarded by what the slave traders though was a buyer, but was actually another band of slave traders, much more fearsome. They were offered a nights stay in the ship, and when the dwarves went to sleep, the other slavers killed them in their sleep.
       Ieteiline was bieng transported in the middle of the night with her hands tied from rope. She was about to be thrown into another room on another ship when she saw Grahvien already in the room. She was imprisoned there for a month and almost died from starvation.

       Ieteiline and Grahvien had enough of this and came up with an escape plan (Ask ICly). After they escaped, they wandered for 5 months and found a towne in Eurisko. They were in love and were married there, not under any religion.

       They moved out of the city a way's away and had a cabin. Grahvien Went to towne for his job and supplies every day while Ieteiline lumbered and was the housewife, so to speak. But when she was 22, she was lumbering as her husband was at work one day. That day she was forcefully kidnapped once again, but woke up several days later in Estavyr. This is where her new life began.


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PostSubject: Re: Sarah Kaedwin   Sarah Kaedwin EmptyThu Apr 17, 2014 5:19 pm

My limited understanding of elves puts her age of 22 at being very young.
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PostSubject: Re: Sarah Kaedwin   Sarah Kaedwin EmptyThu Apr 17, 2014 5:20 pm

thorogoodd wrote:
My limited understanding of elves puts her age of 22 at being very young.
Yes. Young indeed.
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PostSubject: Re: Sarah Kaedwin   Sarah Kaedwin EmptyThu Apr 17, 2014 5:23 pm

The age of 22 for a elf I believe makes them look like they are 10 or something
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PostSubject: Re: Sarah Kaedwin   Sarah Kaedwin EmptyThu Apr 17, 2014 5:37 pm

She seems a bit young for an elf, but I would wait and see what Krug or Zaku says. Otherwise, I like that the emphasis is on the actual biography for a change.
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PostSubject: Re: Sarah Kaedwin   Sarah Kaedwin EmptyFri Apr 18, 2014 5:03 pm

22 would make her very young, pretty much a child. If that's what you're going for by all means, but if you intend on her being a young adult then you ought to boost her age up some to represent that.

I also appreciate the backstory. I see that you didn't post this character in approval first, presumably because she has no outstanding abilities, gear, or magical prowess, but just to be safe please let us know about anything like that if it's not on the page.

Other then that, good job. :)
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PostSubject: Re: Sarah Kaedwin   Sarah Kaedwin EmptyFri Apr 18, 2014 7:02 pm

I just want to ask if Kaedwin was a direct reference, or just a name you've made?
I am terribad with names, so I understand fully if its either or. Just curious.
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PostSubject: Re: Sarah Kaedwin   Sarah Kaedwin EmptySat Apr 19, 2014 1:02 pm

I just kinda thought what would fit with Sarah as a first name.
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