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Posts : 13 Join date : 2014-04-15 Location : Locked in Pat's basement.
| Subject: Atumok Noloorn Thu Apr 17, 2014 2:38 am | |
| Atumok Noloorn Gender: Male Age: 46 Race: Orc-Kind Languages: Common, Orcish Birthplace: Olkhun Occupation: Black Smith/Hired Guard Religion: None Hair Color: Gray Hair Style(Head): Bald Eye Color: Dark Green Skin Tone: Dark Gray Height: 7ft8 Weight: 285lbs (No Armor) Body Type: Endomorph (Big Boned) _____ Personality: Atumok is a middle-aged Orc that favors any type of alcohol. He is also generally hot-headed and known to draw his sword in heated arguments causing many people to not question what he says true or not. His skills in blacksmithing are above average compared to most causing him to take pride in his work, offending his work will cause him to become unpleasant to be around. When in conversation he may seem kind but that can change quite quickly depending on the circumstances. He could speak rather well due to him getting around in the hired guard business. When Atumok is drunk he doesn't stay drunk for long often drinking until he passes out. He has a hatred for elves and humans alike, but he strongly dislikes elves even more than the humans. He trusts no human but for the right amount will keep them protected same with elves but for a higher fee. Overall he tolerates most and will work just about anyone for the right price. In combat he is known to be ruthless and enjoys seeing the sight of blood. His temper is overall described as easily provoked and when you get him started he is hard to calm down often causing harm or destruction of property. _____ Appearance: Atumok is a 7ft8 grey skinned Orc that extremely muscular towering over most humans and elves, even some of his own kind. His eyes are a dark green and his face is worn with deep wrinkles and has a stern look. His skin is tough bearing a faded blue tribal tattoo on his left arm and going down the side of his chest. His hands have scars and burn marks from working in the forges, he also wears steel vambraces to cover his hands and fore-arms in battle. Atumok wears a ragged cloth around his waist keeping his scarred upper body showing. His pants are ragged aswell made from an old hide of some sort of animal back in his home land. He wears steel knee guards that were given to him by his father which was one of the finer blacksmiths. His feet are protected by think socks and a pair of thick sandals which are tied tightly in place by fine rope. His sword which was given to him by his father, that is most of the time in a leather sheath is made of steel that is engraved on one part and the blade itself is the most reflective. _____ Back-Story: Atumok Noloorn lived on the outskirts Olkhun in a community that had only one blacksmith, his father. Being the only blacksmith his father made a small profit after the Orcs came back from battle and needed their equipment and weapons fixed. Due to that very reason Atumok's father needed him to help at a young age. Over the years Atumok learned how to fix swords and repair equipment and when he reached the age he was sent to fight in neighboring communities conflicts after being given his father's sword. During the conflicts that occurred on the outskirts of Olkhun with neighboring Orc communities over resources and other things such as land disputes he slowly became an experienced warrior on the battlefield. Eventually Atumok's village was pillaged while he was out fighting a conflict in a rather far stronghold that would take days to return from. When Atumok did return he was devastated finding his home in ruins and his father's corpse in the forge his father worked for years around. Atumok sought out for revenge he tracked down the Orcs which pillaged his village with what remained of his tribe. They invaded the enemy's village over night slaughtering all men women and children in their sleep and executed their war lord in the center of town the next morning. After the village was burned to the ground he eventually went to Olkhun's capital and used what gold he has saved up over time to buy a one way sea faring trip across the Great Divide and eventually landing in Evesar. From there Atumok worked as hired muscle for various merchants over a short span of time and made his way through Aldinor with the coin he acquired in an attempt to flee the city life. From there he made his way up the river and entered the city of Estavyr and made his way into the Syndhal District in search of easy coin to earn. ________ Abilities: - Quote :
Remarkable Strength: Being a 7ft8 extremely muscular Orc Atumok can generate quite a powerful force when swinging his sword often cutting off limbs with ease. He is also known to pick humans up shortly after slamming them into the ground, knocking them off their feet in combat and even stomping on skulls when need be. (This is only describing the ruthless part of him he's much kinder when he's not in combat and happy)
Two Handed Weaponary: After using his father's two handed sword for a long while he is a master in two handed weaponry. He shows his expertise in this skill during combat.
Blacksmithing: Since Atumok was blacksmithing alongside his father at a young age up until current day when need be he's became adept at blacksmithing, he knows how to repair armor and most weapons. He also can forge weapons given the right resources, time and coin.
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- Things to note:
-Being such a large and heavy being Atumok can only run for short periods of time often tiring out after a short while. When Atumok runs the ground is said to shake within a small radius of where he is running.
-He wears no armor, keeping his entire upper body exposed.
-Being a 7ft tall Orc he has to squeeze in doorways often damaging them.
________ Inventory: - Quote :
(Most of this is equipped) 2x Steel Vanbraces 1x Large Steel Sword 150 Gold Pieces (Left over from getting here) 1x Pair of Steel Knee Gaurds 1x Loin Cloth 1x Pants 1x Large Leather Sheath
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Zaku Administrator
Posts : 108 Join date : 2014-02-25
| Subject: Re: Atumok Noloorn Fri Apr 18, 2014 5:01 pm | |
| Overall I'm pretty ok with this character and I think he might be an interesting addition to the server. However, I have to say that since this character looks prone to violence that you should be ready to deal with those kind of consequences once they play out IC. I'm not judging your ability to RP by any means, but I just have to say that everyone should be just as ready to lose as they are to win, and always make sure that the conflicts you participate in are engaging, and at the very least character development for all parties involved.
With that said you have my OK. You're one of two Orc blacksmiths, so hopefully there's some fun competition there between you two. I'm going to give this a few hours yet before I move it and let anyone else chime in before I make a final decision and send it through. Good job though. | |
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Blue Member
Posts : 70 Join date : 2014-03-11
| Subject: Re: Atumok Noloorn Fri Apr 18, 2014 5:07 pm | |
| - Zaku wrote:
- With that said you have my OK. You're one of two Orc blacksmiths, so hopefully there's some fun competition there between you two. I'm going to give this a few hours yet before I move it and let anyone else chime in before I make a final decision and send it through. Good job though.
There's a dwarven blacksmith too. I think we have a blacksmith battle royale on our hands. | |
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Atlas Member
Posts : 39 Join date : 2014-03-24
| Subject: Re: Atumok Noloorn Fri Apr 18, 2014 6:18 pm | |
| - Blue wrote:
- Zaku wrote:
- With that said you have my OK. You're one of two Orc blacksmiths, so hopefully there's some fun competition there between you two. I'm going to give this a few hours yet before I move it and let anyone else chime in before I make a final decision and send it through. Good job though.
There's a dwarven blacksmith too. I think we have a blacksmith battle royale on our hands. I've gotten a head start it seems too | |
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Zaku Administrator
Posts : 108 Join date : 2014-02-25
| Subject: Re: Atumok Noloorn Tue Apr 22, 2014 8:52 am | |
| Moved to the character board. I should've did this days ago. | |
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